This is rest of my new book. We were supposed to do a page a day and then some days we had to skip school and some days our internet didn't work. Because it's working now we are just going to post the rest.
My mom laminated the pages and we got it bound into a real book in Jacmel, so now we can use it just like any other book! But only upstairs. Because it might get lost or ruined downstairs.
Thanks for keeping up. I am going to write another book in the series, but for now I am going to work on the game I am inventing called, "Adventure Dolls" so it might be a while.
I think that's it for today.
Love,
Nia
PS-- Leave me a comment about what is your favorite chapter and what is your favorite illustration.
PPS- My mom thinks the best illustration is chapter six. She doesn't have a favorite chapter yet.
I loved the ending! Great story! I was so glad to see that you put it up today! Good job!
ReplyDeleteI love the ending, too! Chapter six is my favorite illustration, because I love all the stuff floating under the angry sea, and the boys floating on top. Most of all, I love how the whole story came together, and how the people in the story had certain things about them that stuck with them, so they made sense. Jack snoring at the end was a PERFECT end to the story, and I hope to read more of their adventures after you finish your game.
ReplyDeleteHi Nia! Thanks for sharing your story with us! The illustration that I liked best was the first chapter. I liked how you showed both boys in their own homes while they were talking on the telephone. My favoriate chapter was the last one. I think it is interesting that you continued with the fact that Jack keeps falling asleep! Good job! I love you!
ReplyDeleteHi Nia! I loved reading your book! My favorite chapter was chapter four, and my favorite illustration was also chapter 4!
ReplyDeleteGreat job, Nia! I'm so proud of you for finishing it! You are a good writer :)
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